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She always fell for boys who needed saving.

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She always fell for boys who needed saving.

Giving them kisses in the dark
to numb their headache from
drinking too much and yet
not enough to kill lust.

She was always adored by boys, who,
if given the chance, would rebuild
the world for her.

But she wanted to be the heroine
and refused to see
she needed saving, too.
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EDIT: whoa whoa whoa guys!!! :D this poem made FRONT PAGE! :') :la: I'm so happy and excited!!! Thank you all for your support, please do understand it will take me a while to get through all the comments , but I promise I will reply to everyone :3 Thank you again! :heart: :love:
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ForgottonJourney's avatar
My life..... Only.... Sometimes the people I save, don't realize they needed to be saved.... Until later