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She always fell for boys who needed saving.

Giving them kisses in the dark
to numb their headache from
drinking too much and yet
not enough to kill lust.

She was always adored by boys, who,
if given the chance, would rebuild
the world for her.

But she wanted to be the heroine
and refused to see
she needed saving, too.
Thank you for reading ! Please tell me what you think, any feedback is greatly appreciated!


EDIT: whoa whoa whoa guys!!! :D this poem made FRONT PAGE! :') :la: I'm so happy and excited!!! Thank you all for your support, please do understand it will take me a while to get through all the comments , but I promise I will reply to everyone :3 Thank you again! :heart: :love:
All I have to say is: [link] :D :D naw, but seriously :D
also, I am so happy that so many of you can relate to my poem and told me so, it feels good not to be alone :) :hug:
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Freak-With-Issues Jan 23, 2014  Student General Artist
This is so strong and relate-able.  A beautiful piece. :)
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CMFJ-4Lif3 Oct 29, 2013  Student General Artist
Powerful. Reminds me of myself when I was blindly in love with a guy who was suicidal and depressed enough that I was never noticed and it took me a long time to realize just. THAT. "she needed saving too"

Wow! Beautiful!
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sasunaru16 Dec 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much! Hug 
Yes, one often forgets the importance of self-loving when in love.. :)
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Starsieinwonderland Oct 1, 2013  Student Artist
So so frigin true!
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sasunaru16 Dec 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thank you, I'm glad you  could relate! :D
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Sireynia May 21, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Wow! So beautiful and so true! :love:
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:iconcholie:
please forgive my :+fav: and run. i cannot seem to think of something better to say than 'i like this,' at least not in this moment.
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:iconangelwithlittlehands:
it makes me cry, because i see mayself in it.
its the truth!
thanks for writing!!!
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sasunaru16 Apr 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much! :heart: I'm really happy you could see yourself in it :)
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