literature

Loving blindly .

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Darling, there was always a difference between
who you are and how you made me feel;
Instant competition, perfect opposition,
I just chose to turn my compass backwards.

I cared too much about how the poison tasted
to notice I was drinking it while
forcing it down your throat.
I was too blind in bliss to see that
when we kissed, you spit it all in my mouth.

And when you gave me a mocking grin
while watching my body decay at your feet,
I wonder why did I always see
a loving smile?

I guess that's why our hearts are not eyes
and they beat on the left -
there's nothing right about loving blindly.
“Perhaps our eyes need to be washed by our tears once in a while, so that we can see Life with a clearer view again.”
-Alex Tan


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beautiful-creature's avatar
I loved the last few lines. Another remarkable poem. Flows beautifully and has that raw, poetic, emotional feel to it <3