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Never have I tasted lips
that could demolish me quite like yours.
Don't touch my skin like that,
you'll make me want to slip
into your veins.

WARNING: I'm more addictive than heroine.

Side effects may include sweat-soaked sheets,
loss of sight and bruises
[on your neck, collarbone and
every-fucking-where you'd like them, baby.]

Too bad you never were one to read labels.

I'll leave you so breathless, you'll find
your own fingers digging at your throat.
Sorry to disappoint   -
oxygen will never satisfy you after
you get a taste of my breath
      [between your hips.]
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~Let me take you for a ride with the devil in the details
We'll kiss and tremble with delight.
Everything is fine with the devil in the details,
We're gonna dance with him tonight...
- Devil in the details (Placebo)

Thank you for reading, please tell me what you think! :D
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Mood: Joy ~cskadoz Oct 30, 2012   General Artist
way intoxicating . . . dumping lucy for you!
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Mood: Flirty ~sasunaru16 Oct 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Hahaha thanks ;) :kiss:
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This. Is. A perpective most true For, in watching god from afar, I fall and am consumed as I partake, fully, in the experience.
Such joy,
Such heat, such touch.

To be one with all the detail is to touch god.


[I now know what it is to touch hearts. I am in love]

thank you for the heat. thank you.
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Mood: Love ~sasunaru16 Apr 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
wow. this comment is amazing! :D thank you , I am so happy that my poem touched you so :D
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:iconspiritduchess:
I am glad also.
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~Okaysional Mar 20, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh, I love it, love love love it!! I can't say why... it just.... goes!!!
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Mood: Love ~sasunaru16 Mar 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thank you thank you thank you! :D
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!nottherightword Mar 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
love the originality of this...bravo
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Mood: Love ~sasunaru16 Mar 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much! :D
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~passionriter Mar 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I really love this. I like the humor you add to it, and I love the mood of the those thing. It's not too dirty, but enough that you get the point. Great-no, amazing job! :iconbravoplz:
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