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I never believed you,
I only wanted to.

.....

Lying back to back
I was counting your breaths
to make sure your lack of
heart
didn't leave you
dead.

....

Like a ghost
the fading memories of your touch
kept screaming
what I was trying to forget.

...

Oh, why did I give it up to you?

..

I know it's my fault.
My expectations were greater than
what you were willing to offer,
and I got scared.

I tried shutting you out,
to gather myself together
behind a shield of apathy,
but only ended up in
self-destruction.

.

Your kiss never tasted as
intoxicatingly bitter
as the last time
I made love to you...

Still, I cannot forget you
because
no matter how
little love you gave me,
it was still the most
I've ever received...



Thank you for reading! :heart: Please tell me what you think, any feedback is appreciated!
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AnotherPassenger Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
The title of your poem was used here <3
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sasunaru16 Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Very nice! The words following this title were just amazing! :D :heart:
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AnotherPassenger Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you very much.
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waiting-for-wings Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Its beautiful and sad but wonderfully written
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sasunaru16 Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :love: I'm glad you like it!
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Chrissijulius Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
aww beautiful! I totally know how you feel...
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sasunaru16 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :heart: :*
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Singer-Of-Light Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Wow. Thank you for sharing such raw real beautiful emotion
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sasunaru16 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you for reading it! :heart: ;)
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Singer-Of-Light Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
no prob!
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