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A letter to past loves.

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new realizations about love]


You only ever touched me
in the dark alleys of town,
out of sight, but you were never
out of my mind.
Your kisses were new and sloppy,
and your hands left bruises
on my chilled skin.
My friends said you were bad for me,
but I fell in love with your eyes of coal.


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new realizations about love]


Thank you so much for reading! :love: Any feedback is greatly appreciated! :D
How did the poem make you feel, could you relate to it? :)

I'm so sorry I wasn't able to thank everyone for adding She always fell for boys who needed saving. to their favorites yet! There's just so much of you :P :D :heart: :tighthug:
Thank you again for getting it on the front page! :glomp:


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waiting-for-wings's avatar
oh wow that was amazing! beautifully written! It says so much